Wednesday, January 14, 2015

Offer he couldn't refuse

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I pulled out my gun and made him an offer he couldn't refuse.

He backed off!

Gave me a look.

She thanked all heavens and collected her clothes while I made sure he left.

I then asked, "Mam, are you alright?"

18 comments :

  1. Indian Girl American WorldWednesday, January 14, 2015 3:41:00 AM

    Great work! It's difficult to narrate something in few words and you just did that so brilliantly!:)

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    1. SankeerthWednesday, January 14, 2015 3:42:00 AM

      Thank you very much for your kind words, Sonal :) Welcome to my blog!

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  2. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost Wednesday, January 14, 2015 9:48:00 AM

    An offer he couldn't refuse--I like that. Very powerful writing on this one.
    http://peppersfetch.blogspot.com/2015/01/story-synopsis-offering-pa-ro.html

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    1. SankeerthWednesday, January 14, 2015 11:13:00 PM

      I'm glad you liked it Cara! Welcome to my blog :) I'll definitely check out your post.

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  3. Ranu 802Wednesday, January 14, 2015 8:39:00 PM

    It truly is a wonderful story.

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  4. Sheila GoodWednesday, January 14, 2015 9:44:00 PM

    Great job! So nice to see there is another writer who has a bit of the dark side to show. LOL, enjoyed it very much.

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  5. AnonymousFriday, January 16, 2015 12:06:00 PM

    Interesting little tale! Well done. :)

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  6. AseemSaturday, January 17, 2015 4:34:00 AM

    That's an interesting take on the prompt. Good story :).

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  7. UnknownSaturday, January 17, 2015 3:04:00 PM

    Brilliant, I find myself guessing and plotting :D

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    1. SankeerthSaturday, January 17, 2015 8:03:00 PM

      Thank you Vidya! I'm glad you stopped by. Btw, what did you guess?

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  8. glynis rankinMonday, January 19, 2015 6:39:00 AM

    Great story in just a few words

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  9. SankeerthMonday, January 19, 2015 11:43:00 PM

    I'm glad you liked it Glynis! welcome to my blog :)

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  10. VinithaWednesday, January 21, 2015 1:04:00 PM

    That's a great story narrated in five sentences, Sankeerth. :)

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