Wednesday, January 14, 2015

Offer he couldn't refuse

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I pulled out my gun and made him an offer he couldn't refuse.

He backed off!

Gave me a look.

She thanked all heavens and collected her clothes while I made sure he left.

I then asked, "Mam, are you alright?"

18 comments :

  1. Great work! It's difficult to narrate something in few words and you just did that so brilliantly!:)

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    1. Thank you very much for your kind words, Sonal :) Welcome to my blog!

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  2. An offer he couldn't refuse--I like that. Very powerful writing on this one.
    http://peppersfetch.blogspot.com/2015/01/story-synopsis-offering-pa-ro.html

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    1. I'm glad you liked it Cara! Welcome to my blog :) I'll definitely check out your post.

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  3. Great job! So nice to see there is another writer who has a bit of the dark side to show. LOL, enjoyed it very much.

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    1. Thank you Deboshree! I'm glad you liked it :)

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  5. That's an interesting take on the prompt. Good story :).

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  6. Brilliant, I find myself guessing and plotting :D

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    1. Thank you Vidya! I'm glad you stopped by. Btw, what did you guess?

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  7. I'm glad you liked it Glynis! welcome to my blog :)

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  8. That's a great story narrated in five sentences, Sankeerth. :)

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    1. Thank you Vinitha :) thanks for stopping by..:)

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