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| At Pondicherry Beach |
I sat there for almost an hour and it would be a mistake if I say that I've stumbled upon that place.
For all the sixty minutes of the time traveled, no tear rolled down my cheek without a memory.
Few were sweet and few bitter.
But the one in those memories was glorious.
I sat there for almost an hour and it would be a mistake if I say that I've stumbled upon that place.
This post is a part of
Five Sentence Fiction - Memories at LillieMcFerrin.com,
Two Shoes Tuesday - Memory,
Three Word Wednesday -- Week 418Bitter, Glorious and Stumble)
I often walk on the beach, feel the vastness of the ocean and remember.
ReplyDeleteand the memories keep flashing without a pause :)
DeleteThe beauty in finding a special place by the sea is that it will always talk to you.
ReplyDeletewell said Robin..and also listen to everything we say :)
DeleteThis was wonderful, journeying to a place that evokes such strong memories of someone special. I love the intensity and the simple truth of the words. Beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for your kind words Josie.. I'm glad you liked it :)
DeleteA flash fiction in a poetic form is beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sushree.. I'm glad you liked it :)
DeleteSimple, but speaks so much of emotions. Nice! ;o)
ReplyDeleteThank you Abelle.. I'm glad you liked it :)
DeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sheila!
DeleteIt is a true and honest write up :) couldn't stop myself from penning a Haiku
ReplyDeleteMoments…bitter sweet
Sun, shade and rain…I embrace
Life at end worthwhile
Thank you very much for your kind words Shweta :)
DeleteThat's a touching Haiku with feel in it..!!
At times we end up at places which comforts us driving down the memory lane.. beach is one of it.... Anyways.. this is first time I've gone through each word... well expressed :)
ReplyDeleteTrue that Aka.. and I'm so happy that you've gone through each word :):) Thank very much and keep visiting !!
DeleteIt seems like water draws that out of a person. There is nothing more peaceful.
ReplyDeleteWater and especially beaches have that charm and magic in them! Thanks for stopping by Kathy :)
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