Tuesday, May 12, 2015

Faith, family and friends

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I felt as if there were shadows moving hauntingly towards us.

Impulsively, we walked faster and faster with an intent to flee.

Though we tried to be calm, the fear of death lingered on our faces.

They finally surrounded us and took all our money, but left my family unharmed.

Faith, family and friends; what else do I need and what else do I have?


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  1. AnonymousWednesday, May 13, 2015 6:23:00 AM

    Hi. Nice to meet you. Those words, Faith, Family and Friends are three of the very most important things in life. A story with a philosophical ending.

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    1. SankeerthWednesday, May 13, 2015 10:38:00 PM

      Hi Val,
      Nice to meet you too :) I'm glad you liked the story!
      Yeah! Faith Family and Friends are the most important things in life and the three cannot live without the others.

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  2. AnonymousWednesday, May 13, 2015 5:27:00 PM

    Indeed, a story with meaning. Well done on that.

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    1. SankeerthWednesday, May 13, 2015 10:42:00 PM

      Thank you very much for stopping by McGuffy! I'm glad you liked it :)

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  3. AkankshaWednesday, May 13, 2015 11:36:00 PM

    Hey Sankeerth.. You did it again... I must say.. you viably work-around with words..:).. Indeed these 3 F's are vital elements of one's life.

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    1. SankeerthWednesday, May 13, 2015 11:52:00 PM

      Akanksha, I'm really happy to see you here! Thank you very much for your kind words :)

      you are one of those three important,vital elements of my life :)

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  4. Old EggThursday, May 14, 2015 5:57:00 AM

    Often in a mishap or other trauma we realise the true values in life.

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  5. AnonymousThursday, May 14, 2015 7:11:00 AM

    Glad to read a post on family, dadda :D :)

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  6. Josie Two ShoesThursday, May 14, 2015 7:52:00 AM

    Thank you for joining us for Two Shoes Tuesday, Sankeerth! This was a frightening story with an excellent truth. We may value our possessions, but the most valued thing we have is family, the people in our lives. I also loved the sign you posted, with the thought of "having a place to go"... a placer to call home also makes our hearts feel so good!

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    1. SankeerthMonday, June 22, 2015 10:32:00 PM

      Thank you from the bottom of my heart Josie! I also thank you for the prompt you give us every Tuesday. Please keep doing and keep motivating us to write :)

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  7. BelieverThursday, May 14, 2015 10:21:00 AM

    Haunting story. Nice work!
    http://cupofguilt.com/five-sentence-fiction-family/

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  8. PatriciaFriday, May 15, 2015 9:00:00 AM

    Very inventive the way you incorporated three different hops in your story. Well done.

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    1. SankeerthMonday, June 22, 2015 10:32:00 PM

      I'm glad you liked it Patricia.. Thank you for stopping by! :)

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