Monday, August 04, 2014

I was no more Secure



Dauntlessly, they started crawling towards me, in an aspect that I shouldn't just flee.

Just a pile of flesh I was to them, which can be used, dishonored, passed, played, raped and killed.

I saw neither guilt nor any fear built, in their eyes.

Slowly, they started to quench the thirst and a cold-heartened evil among them said, “MOVE! I’LL BE THE FIRST”.

Though I was in a land having population more than a 100 crore, I was no more Secure.


This post is a part of Five Sentence Fiction – Secure activity at lilliemcferrin.com.

6 comments :

  1. Very precise and nice description. Short, Specific and Sharp. Impressing part is a guy writing this... Thanks for being sensible enough. This proves that there are men who do respect women. Thanks for kindling the hope

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    1. Thank you very much Prathyusha!!

      Knowing that this kindled your hope has really made my day:-)

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  2. Really nice sankeerth. .....there many people to sympathize but very few to empathize. .... and that too among guys.... people like uou are an asset to the society like ours....keep it up

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  3. We all know this is no more just a story.....though not a pleasant topic, you did well...

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    1. You're right Mridubala. This is no more a story and I wish this these of incidents never happen again. Thank you for stopping by.

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