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Hours passed and I was still at that beach, lost in my thoughts, lost in my love.
I went back to the past where in , she leaned towards me, held my hand with my fingers between her's and that's the moment when I said to myself, "I'll never let her go".
I loved her a lot, planned to live my entire life with her, married her..!!
But God has sent a completely different train at her platform.
"Dad, Dad, Dad -- can Mommy see us from that side of the sea?", asked our son who shook me from my thoughts and to whom I told that, people who die go to the other side of the sea and return when their kids grow up.
This post is a part of the Five Sentence Fiction - Horizon activity at lilliemcferrin.com.
This post is a part of the Five Sentence Fiction - Horizon activity at lilliemcferrin.com.
quite touching, i like it
ReplyDeleteYes it is!! I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteBeautiful and bittersweet. I think it's always hard to know what to tell kids about death.
ReplyDeletehttp://hickswyliedna.blogspot.com/2014/10/undoing-damage.html
and the most hurting thing is that kids believe whatever we say..
DeleteThanks for stopping by Ursula!!
Oh my...poignant, beautifully written. Wonderful piece for this prompt.
ReplyDeleteHere is my story: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2014/10/horizon.html
Thank you for stopping by McGuffy!! I really appreciate it.
DeleteThat's so sad. Very touching. Beautifully penned..
ReplyDeleteYeah, Vinitha. So sad it is. Thanks for stopping by.!!
Deleteemotional and touching
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Thank you Cifar :)
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